What’s A Good Thesis Statement For The Topic, What Is Hypertension And How Does It Affect The Black Community?

I’m  in a speech class, and I am so confused, my topic is What is hypertension and how does it affect the Black Community? Could someone help me with a good thesis statement.Please.
Hypertension can affect the black community because if a person suffered from hypertension it is dangerous because it makes the heart work harder to pump blood out to the body and it cause hardening of the arteries, that can lead to atherosclerosis, stroke, kidney disease, and even heart failure.






How do you fix hypertension?

Your doctor may recommend several lifestyle changes, including:

  • Eating a healthier diet with less salt (the Dietary Approaches to Stop Hypertension, or DASH, diet)
  • Exercising regularly.
  • Quitting smoking.
  • Limiting the amount of alcohol you drink.
  • Maintaining a healthy weight or losing weight if you’re overweight or obese.

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  • AnswerGirl March 28, 2009, 4:48 pm

    Your thesis statement is the topic of your paper. It is the point that every other paragraph in the body of the essay will prove and emphasize. In this case,

    "hypertension has very negative effects on the Black community"

    is a good enough thesis. Everything else in the essay (or speech) should emphasize or prove how hypertension has negative effects on the Black community. Hope this helps! Good luck!